
- David Wanczyk
My brother on Log Plain Road
with Creedence on the stereo,
too close to the guardrail
in that Taurus he’d later explode.
He’s breaking the limit
on a fifth-gear coast,
gliding home from a mile away
without the brakes,
38 in a 15,
Down on the Corner, Out in the street
driving us hard
on a cricket-danger night,
bring a nickel, tap your feet.
He’s seventeen with paint stains
going on thirty,
and I’m along in the passenger seat,
banging my knees
to the Fogerty beat,
grass-stained eleven
going on seventeen.
Some folks are born
made to wave the flag
he takes a right
and I’m pulled his way,
that look-ma-no-hands style of his
making me close my eyes,
the wind from the broken power window
forcing them open again.
We lean hard
into the downslope,
going twenty now,
home-free (whatever that means),
slow-thrusting over
the rhododendron root
before the basketball hoop
while the stereo skips—
it ain’t me, it ain’t me, it ain’t me,
it ain’t me, it ain’t me,
it ain’t me—feeling
all grown up
as we end it all
on a perfect
key-turn drum flourish,
wailing a little extra
mouth guitar,
unmufflered as we are.
David Wanczyk lives with his wife Megan in Athens, Ohio where he is a teacher of English and a maker of chili. He is also a member of the band DW and the In-laws and the co-editor of Quarter After Eight magazine. His writing can be found at davidwanczyk.blogspot.com.


Hi David,
It’s me Mrs. Fensick. I got an email from your Mom who said I could check out your writing. I’m very impressed. It
takes me back to a time when radio in the car was the ultimate luxury. LOL Today electronics are so much more sophisticated.
I love the poem – more than just a poem.
Underlying tones of older brother idolized, very touching. Simpler times
and so enjoyable.
I do hope life is treating you well – Your Mom told me about your wedding, and your beautiful wife Megan.
Hugs to you both,
Sharon Fensick
Nice work
Fortunate Father